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Das Land

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What is Das Land

Lisez le roman Das Land écrit par l'auteur Dragon_gamer_7190 publié sur WebNovel. This book was written because i was challenged to make it. So please dont comment on it that i suck. it's german. wait does a comment section even exist?...

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This book was written because i was challenged to make it. So please dont comment on it that i suck. it's german. wait does a comment section even exist?

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sharoline · Politique et sciences sociales
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FAN_PRINCESS · Fantaisie
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Mermaid Destiny

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Widhi_7581 · Fantaisie
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Da nur ein Prolog vorhanden ist, kann ich nur 3 Sterne vergeben. Aber du solltest darauf achten, welche Worte groß und welche Worte klein geschrieben werden. das wirkt einfach besser. Oder willst du wie der Autor eines Buches, dass ich gerade lese, werden, über dessen Story sich die Leute bereits in Chapter 1 lustig machen, weil ganze Satzabschnitte fehlen?

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