Darkness (Completed)

I stared at my screen and grinned. My fingers were smashing into my keyboard. Words flew across my screen. I finally answered my fans. I grinned. I smiled. I laughed. My adrenaline is flowing into my soul. I typed the final words, "The End."

I wrote an email and sent my novel to my publisher. I leaned back and gazed at my white roof and thought, "What now?"

The only part of the novel I enjoyed was that. He failed.

During the final battle, he had to overcome his darkness, which was such a vile thing that it caused me to puke when I thought of it.

In fact, I hated my protagonist.

The protagonist, "White" often killed people to test his blade. I recalled his first kill. White stabbed an innocent person, and while reasonable people would puke, Whites actions haunt me even to this day.

White grinned while watching the blood poured out of his victim's neck and into the air. Then White said, "The neck has two large veins called Jugulars. However, they do not carry oxygenated blood, which means that maggot I will kill shortly is feeling pain."

My body shook as if expelling those vile words from its sanctuary.

However, because his first victim was a boy who I had saved a village a few days ago, my twisted readers all commented, "Show us Tim's point of view!"

Once I read their comments, I sighed, and I said, "I will do it if you all donate $500 for it."

At the time, my readers understood I would not do it. However, someone donated the money.

When I saw the money, it stunned me, and I sent a message to the person who donated. But, after I read their response, "I just want to understand what my wife felt during that horrible accident please write it."

I sighed and paused my web novel for a week. While I did not understand that person's motives, I grit my teeth and wrote it.

After describing how Tim, the man White killed, watched in real time as their blood flew into the air. And painted the nearby area. How Tim's first reaction was to reach push away a little girl and yell run.

Tim had wanted to yell, but he could not tell the girl to run away. After failing to shout, Tim looked at White and cursed him while covering his neck. And, how his last sight, was White's wide smile while his other Jugular opened up because of white's vile actions.

But, that was not the worst of it. I had to write about how White would grab his sword and clean it with his tongue. And, I had to picture the reaction of anyone nearby when White said, "The swords no good, but it's used now guess I have to buy it."