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Blue Lock: The Destroyer

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What is Blue Lock: The Destroyer

Lisez le roman Blue Lock: The Destroyer écrit par l'auteur Wraze_Vengeance publié sur WebNovel. Blue Lock self insert, I wrote a novel previously but I lost inspiration for it due to school and work I hope this will be better. Kenta is a physical and defensive monster he’s a force to be reckoned...

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Blue Lock self insert, I wrote a novel previously but I lost inspiration for it due to school and work I hope this will be better. Kenta is a physical and defensive monster he’s a force to be reckoned with, he destroys strikers and defenders alike are you willing to try and score against him.

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Rosa_Fisher · Urbain
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The Thieving Luna

"You lied to me," he breathed out the words like he was tired and did not want to be here, "you lied to everyone." Jade gulped and glanced at his hands that were holding the handcuffs. Even in the dark, she could make out the outline of them. "I didn't want to…" "Yes?" He huffed and mocked, "tell me then did your beloved master have to force your hand to fool every one of us?" To fool me? But he left that unsaid. Jade remained quiet. Every game had unfolded and every clue had been brought out to light. There was nothing she could do, and even if she spoke the truth that was in her heart at the moment, no one would believe her. Not even the man that vowed to. No, her alpha won't believe her. "Please," letting go of her morals, she begged. "Please believe me when I say that I changed—” "No one cares if you have changed or not!" He roared and she flinched at the anger of the wolf. Her head bowed down and the animal inside her submitted to her mate and alpha. Her animal had already betrayed her. "Lies! Lies are what we have heard from you from the beginning!" He spat and the chain rattled in his hands. "There is nothing that will come from that mouth and I will ever believe in again." Jade nodded, her tears blurring the vision but she did not make a sound. Even when she heard him near her. He snatched her hand roughly and clasped the handcuff on her wrist. For the first time, the alpha's actions were in complete contrast to what they had been before and it hurt. "Stay here, thief." The word made her flinch. "You will see the daylight when you receive your judgment." She did not have the strength to open her eyes until she heard his footsteps retreat into the distance, leaving her alone in the cold dark and filthy dungeons of the pack clans. Resigning to her fate, she slowly moved to the wall to which the chains were attached and slid down with her back touching it on the floor. What had she done? * The credit of the images goes to the rightful owner.

Inara_Me · Urbain
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Lance_
Lance_Lv3Lance_

Chapters are way too short, doesn't make sense for a defensive minded player to be scouted for Blue Lock as they are all strikers, after three or four chapters nothing even happened, just a lot of monologue and boring text. Writing quality as a whole is good and articulate, just need to improve pacing and presentation. Good Luck

human_man_69
human_man_69Lv12human_man_69

it kinda feels like your telling me a summary of everything that was supposed to be in the chapter instead of an actual chapter and it's quite hard to read that way.

Wraze_Vengeance
Wraze_VengeanceAuteurWraze_Vengeance

Listen this ain’t no 5 star novel gang, I’m honestly just having fun with it, a defense minded player joining blue lock sounds cool to me, I love defense its my favorite part in all sports, also yes I know the chapters are short I’ll work on it, also don’t just say too short tell me how I can improve my character and his interactions with others I might make him a mute to not talk at all lol

A_Jax
A_JaxLv1A_Jax

Putting aside the length, I have to agree with everybody else. The story reads more like a logbook than any thing else. It reads like he is talking in past tense even though the grammar suggests otherwise, like he is recounting what happened instead of being in the the present. The grammar itself is ok, the paragraphs are bulky and sometimes you'll forget some punctuation when people are talking.

DerekZhang
DerekZhangLv2DerekZhang

the chapters are very short and the story does not make much sense blue lock would not call a defender for a project that is focused on creating the best striker and the mc sincerely as a player but that he is a monster physically and is a good defender that doesn't change the fact that he seems to be made of glass since basically he's just not a professional because he keeps getting hurt a tip for the author if he wanted to write about a defensive player the mc could be a striker and during the blue lock he would turn a defender

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