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An Unscrupulous system, Teaching Scum to be Loyal Husbands

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What is An Unscrupulous system, Teaching Scum to be Loyal Husbands

Lisez le roman An Unscrupulous system, Teaching Scum to be Loyal Husbands écrit par l'auteur Below_the_current publié sur WebNovel. I'm back officially darlings ~Aria cannot remember how she died, knowing only that she died with grievances. An unscrupulous system has bound itself to her and prepositioned a deal:"Cooperate with me,...

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I'm back officially darlings ~ Aria cannot remember how she died, knowing only that she died with grievances. An unscrupulous system has bound itself to her and prepositioned a deal: "Cooperate with me, and you will be able to go back and resolve your grievances." Aria accepted the terms, only it seems this system...really is unscrupulous. What change the fate of the scorned females around the chosen couple? What destroy the beautiful relationship of the female lead and male lead? Isn't it just her seducing those scum men through the means of bed play. Isn't it just her turning the original evil character into a lotus flower. Aish, this system of hers, truly is unscrupulous, it only wants her to sleep with this male lead and that male lead!

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Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

Interesting! The characters are expressive, the storyline keeps readers attention. You have a concept, the writing is fine, but... When I am reading, sometimes I get the impression that you are distracted... but as I say :) follow your dreams! I will come back "here" in a few days ;)

Darine_ALRAMMAH
Darine_ALRAMMAHLv1Darine_ALRAMMAH

This story is humorous, interesting, and well built. There is little mistakes, but they can definitely be ignored next to your captivating style. Character are well built and attractive. I feel that this story is aiming high! Can't wait for more... I am truly inspired by your style and creativity. Few people have the gift that you have in expressing not just scenes, feelings, but also a captivating plot. Not all people have good taste in novels (so don't listen to exaggerated criticism! <3), remember that! Keep going cuz I can't wait for more!

Alexandra_An
Alexandra_AnLv2Alexandra_An

I love your sense of humor. The story is interesting and has potential. Title: Usually the title determines whether or not we will read it. According to literary theorists and famous authors, it should be short, not too transparent, and not too shocking. Yours is way too long. First sentences: Some authors attribute to these few words as magical power that will ultimately enable them to create a bestseller. Yours are dark, torch is such gibberish that may indicate that you have no idea for the plot ... do not encourage further reading. Characters: are fine, but they lack clarity. Structure: in many places there is a lack of, at least short descriptions, e.g. of the characters' behavior or the background of the situation. I hope that will help you to improve the content.

Daoistl4mBE4
Daoistl4mBE4Lv10Daoistl4mBE4

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_AiRen_
_AiRen_Lv10_AiRen_

Your writing style is so expressive and I really like that about of the story. The concept is clear and precise. The plotline is humorously designed attracting the readers and with the free flowing vibe of the work pertaining to scheming system, romance, humour and comic elements here and there is put together skillfully! Good job author!

LuluoO
LuluoOLv13LuluoO

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Proteety_Promi
Proteety_PromiLv3Proteety_Promi

Not bad. It's not my favorite genre, but I like it. I actually read fantasy romance genres the most. But I like the development of the story. Keep it up!

Parisian_Moon
Parisian_MoonLv10Parisian_Moon

Interesting story! I am looking forward to this, but the title is too long. This kind of title used to be a WN trend, but now, I'm not so sure. My book had a long title before, and I changed it because I realized it's kinda cringy.

Kasrna
KasrnaLv1Kasrna

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sharrnister
sharrnisterLv2sharrnister

Transmigration novels is an interesting story to me, so this is a plus point for me. You have a greeat intro that easily shows the personality of the MC. Your writing style is what I loved and overall your work is good! Keep up the good work, Author!

123removed
123removedLv1123removed

Great start! The first chapter left me a bit confused and tbh It's still not all clear to me what's going on, but it's okay because you're writing is really good and the story reads away easily! It's definitely creative and novel, and I love that. You've also worked it out really well. Your twists are surprising and fun. All together it definitely kept me wanting to read more. Way to go, author!

strong_clown
strong_clownLv13strong_clown

Hello Author 👋 it's pleasure to read your book I think the personality of the fl is the best as for the story it's very attractive 👌 I would like you to continue this wonderful story they maybe some errors but I as your hooked fun will be with you I will come back when it in ch 100 until then don't give up 🙏 it's rare for to see a story that is so interesting so if you give up 💀💀💀

Alcelinia
AlceliniaLv10Alcelinia

first of all i always like this kind of genre.. transmigration, reincarnation... but is it me that dont understand the plot ? please someone enlighten me what's the story about. . i ddont understand the point... it seems like the story lot of jumping...

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