the story is very confusing- poor grammars and use of punctuation . poor storyline-its like just walking around in circles where nothing seems to make sense.
well, thanks for the feed back. It's a little confusing, I apologize. Well, it's a draft . I hadn't realized that I had published but let me finish editing and rewriting and you will get it in it's better form.
Also, thanks for the support. You'll get a mention 😉
