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Lisez le roman [DROPPED] Force User Supplementary System écrit par l'auteur toobadImbatman publié sur WebNovel. When Connor awoke in such a bizarre place, he never thought that it would be the Jedi temple and that he would have taken over the body of a youngling. What is this voice in his head and why is Yoda m...

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When Connor awoke in such a bizarre place, he never thought that it would be the Jedi temple and that he would have taken over the body of a youngling. What is this voice in his head and why is Yoda mocking him? ------------------------------------------------------------------- This is my first novel and I am by no means a professional writer. This was simply an idea I had that I wanted to act on. I will try to update the story once week but that may not always be possible. I do not own the image used as the cover.

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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14Aeternabilis

The most frustrating star wars novel I have ever read. The mc does not have a brain and it seems like the author has little knowledge about star wars. It's annoying how the mc saves up his points to "use them when needed" why wait for that when if you used them in the first place they wouldn't be needed? Plus in this story, he needs to take time to integrate them. Saving them up then makes even less sense. However, the main thing that is triggering me is how he places his points, it plainly just don't make sense. He keeps adding points into his lightsaber forms, instead of the force. Star wars revolve around the force, him being weak af in it, then ignoring it when he has the chance to improve it doesn't make sense. He just adds it onto the forms.... you can train the forms why add points to it? You cannot increase his medorian count by training. However, by adding points to the force instead, he can... It's frustrating af. With the skill system... it's plainly put irrelevant just let him learn them like normal people. The system was called force system so I don't see why or how it would teach him how to build robots...

toobadImbatman
toobadImbatmanAuteurtoobadImbatman

I will be a shameless author and give myself five stars. I hope that anyone who trys this book will find themselves enjoying it. I know that I probably make grammatical errors and I probably don't stick to the star wars lore as well as some would like but I also have some good ideas on the story development off this novel and I hope readers can make it for enough to see that.

Alien_Space_Bat
Alien_Space_BatLv5Alien_Space_Bat

Another brainless reincarnator...who has a cheat....but only use it, at last time for showing off... there by gathering unwanted attention....i don't even understand this....training doesn't actually improve the skill??only points does??....also storing points...just to use it at last time to make sudden growth.....why not use it up gradually step by step??

SovereignSloth
SovereignSlothLv11SovereignSloth

One of the best star wars fanfics I've read on this site. Here's hoping that the author doesn't drop the story. Im quite surprised that the story doesn't have a rating yet. Keep up the good work author, wishing and hoping for many chapters. 👍😁😁

Abordoaj
AbordoajLv5Abordoaj

God I thought this was something great because of the rankings but too bad I was quickly dissapointed. Hmmm, let me see where should I start, ok First is the MC -the author didn't explain anything about the mc or wrote about the mc. Like how did the mc get reincarnated or transmigated to stsr wars. Like who he is before and after transmigating or reincarnating in star wars. Like how did he know anything about star wars. Like how did he get a system. Like why did he get chosen by the system. Like why is he a jedi in training. And I can tell you the mc is extremely idiotic just like the one that wrote it. You get what I mean, the author doesnt explain shts. Second is the system -the system is a fcking trash and a fcking scam. I cant even begin how much of a bullsht the system is, there are a few if not most readers will agree with me(if they arent on the authors side)that the system is just bull**** and useless(just a littlr useless) Third is Yodas speech -god I dont know wtfs wrong with the author on this one he just cut a sentece in half and put the first part in the last part for example, FROM you are chosen by mr. Jedi INTO by mr. Jedi you are chosen god yoda doesnt speak like that I really dont know if the author has watched, read or atleast played star wars. Forth is MCs choice -I quite like how he dealth with the situation of the temple thats a + for me and then he upgraded his lightsaber skills so he cant atleast feel the force thats another + then he upgraded his force power and he earned telekinesis thats another + but then the mc became trash it said the people are schemers but he'll scheme more than them but he couldnt even use the system wisely in the 3 years of his training he didnt use the points and he keeps upgrading his lightsaber skills instead of upgrading his force. So in conclusion this fanfic isnt worth reading well that is if you're a dumb fck who cant even notice the obvious mistakes here and support the author who isnt doing anything to fix the mistakes the readers are reading which is extremely obvious so us couole of readers are trying to advice him but sadly stubborn fcks like this sht here isnt gonna move up the society like a trash(like me)

genit
genitLv5genit

This is a well written story with excellent character and background development. Please don't stop this halfway and thanks for the story.😀😀😀😎

Dragonbeast211
Dragonbeast211Lv13Dragonbeast211

Good book please do not drop 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

Firepa
FirepaLv4Firepa

This is better than most star wars fanfics that I've read if the author keeps this up i think i might be hooked on this story. In my personal opinion i think that in time this could rival some of the other star wars fanfics

JohnnyReever
JohnnyReeverLv5JohnnyReever

Surprisingly good is what I have to say. I first thought it will be like all the others where he goes ape**** op on is . Only concern now is whether or not the author will continue and not drop it after some time like many other fanfics so far.

Li_Cangtian
Li_CangtianLv6Li_Cangtian

Dropped. Was going really well. Honestly 4 stars all around, but its dropped now so 1 star.

AcidFlame
AcidFlameLv5AcidFlame

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Grey1902
Grey1902Lv6Grey1902

Fantastic truly a great read would definitely recommend reading this it's very well written the only bad thing I can say about it is that there's not more of it.

RationalMind
RationalMindLv4RationalMind

Good enough. And Grammer is also good. No eye watering and headache inducing English here. I hope the author continues the story and also cross-posts on other sites (especially ffn).

Xandalar
XandalarLv13Xandalar

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Adrian_Wamae
Adrian_WamaeLv13Adrian_Wamae

It was nice while it lasted. Can't believe the book was dropped 😭.

ClarityDojo
ClarityDojoLv13ClarityDojo

man another good story dropped and i really liked this one...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

GnawingJackal
GnawingJackalLv5GnawingJackal

Apart from giving off the vibe that he thinks Jedi are cool the main character has had no character development. He has not so much as expressed admiration for any of the Jedi ideals or any of his mentors. 26 chapters in the MC is a complete stranger. The story needs to be revised to include some opinions the MC has about the people around him. We don;t even get to know if he thinks his efforts are worthwhile or actually being a Jedi in practice is for him or not. Other Jedi follow the Jedi religion. The MC can use his system to get free access to the mysteries of the Force without having to be all humble and good. Other Jedi live humbly and are deeply spiritual. The MC goes around killing all bad guys in his path like a vengeful psychopath. The natural story progression would probably have Mr MC decide to stop being a patient, self-sacrificing Jedi and decide to go at least half Dark in order to live it up with his new magic powers. The Force and a system just don't mesh well.

Michael_Joe
Michael_JoeLv4Michael_Joe

Honestly, I am really enjoying this story. I think the character is well thought out and I'm enjoying the plot that you have so far. Keep up the good work author

TestaTaichi
TestaTaichiLv14TestaTaichi

Read it ... u understand why thls fanfic is sooo goood... Slow paced star wars i love it .. good job author .. countie the fanflc.. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

santuchebrol385
santuchebrol385Lv4santuchebrol385

Awesome story especially one with the light side of the force many of them just go for the dark side immediately and then it turns full of angst it's good to see some light side fics thank you for the wonderful fanfic hope you continue.

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