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[Blood Moon] Twilight

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Lisez le roman [Blood Moon] Twilight écrit par l'auteur SJD_0922 publié sur WebNovel. Stephen Tine is a 12 year old who is smart to all hell, he is a hermit, shy and very timid around other people but the one time he decide to offer help to a group of people, turned something he had sp...

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Stephen Tine is a 12 year old who is smart to all hell, he is a hermit, shy and very timid around other people but the one time he decide to offer help to a group of people, turned something he had speculated to reality. It all starts with the Cullens having car problems

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DEATHS_SHADOW07
DEATHS_SHADOW07Lv4DEATHS_SHADOW07

I don't understand a thing? So mc is 12 but has a cane and is a chain smoker who can drive. I am confuzzled. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

hhhhz45
hhhhz45Lv13hhhhz45

its badly written, grammar doesnt exist! tralallalalalalalalallalallallalallalalalalallalalalallalalalalallalalalalalalallalalalallalalallalalalaalalalallalallalpalalalapall

asaade
asaadeLv10asaade

trash fic ............... trash fic ............... trash fic ............... trash fic ............... trash fic ............... trash fic ............... trash fic ............... trash fic ...............

bondarant
bondarantLv2bondarant

It's not a very interesting story. In the beginning, there was a lot to uncover in The Past of the Main Character. And I think that was done in an incorrect manner everything was just slapped on the face of the Cullens like begging for attention or pity Not to mention the unrealistic acts of the main character Like him being able to find out about vampires and shapeshifters even when the governments can't Characters are not very fleshed out either there is always a feeling of disconnection the readers cannot truly come to care about what happens to a character Not to mention everything just gets brushed up quickly that we don't really have time to sink in the reality of the story The thing is this story is like a man went "what would happen if I was a crippled child with murdered parents in the world of twilight" and this was produced Not to mention a lot of writing mistakes happened and it was not eloquently typed out that i can't take it seriously

Sticky11
Sticky11Lv14Sticky11

You should proof read your writin before publishing as some sentences make no sense or words are spelled in correctly also some of the plot is confusing

StarWriting
StarWritingLv10StarWriting

I honestly can’t tell if this story was written purely to troll or not. The best way i can honestly describe it is tokyo revengers meets twilight and then crank up the edginess by about 10x.

Yuri_PlayzMC
Yuri_PlayzMCLv1Yuri_PlayzMC

The story explains and correlates well with the story Stephanie made. Main character fits in with the story well without being random and thrown in. Overall wonderful so far!

FanFicReader_101
FanFicReader_101Lv14FanFicReader_101

Is he ever going to full function over his body if get turned into a vampire because in my option it might be boring if he can’t even defend himself tho I really like your story so keep it 👍

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