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It is has being awhile since I laughed this hard reading a fanfic, pretty good comedy and the story feels nice, the part where they get isekaied throught me off for a second, so it is better if you add the Omake thing at the end of the chapter title. I almost quitted because of it xD
Pretty good, loyal to the source, and keeping the same dark theme. My only advise would be is that, as the show is short, and at the pace you are going the fic will finish in 150 chapters or so, but I can see it has more potential than just that. So why not going to other worlds after finishing this one, like DC and Marvel, or first to more low level ones like Resident Evil or Final Fantasy. I mean, if you don't make the MC too OP and can grow more later on in this worlds could make a nice story.
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yeaa, that would be cool to, I remember seeing an image of a saiyan 4 vegito like that.
xd yea, I didn't know to what translate it. I thought of doing a vegetal name but I couldn't find a name that fit the mc
Well, maybe, but u can also think that he has like complete monopoly with the dragon balls after all so it is not really a waste, after all he need instant TP anyway.
I mean... it is basically a chicken thief
Not all, where I am, only Angron is female. Not completely sure tho
WHK40 Fanfic!! The MC has a system that make him earn rewards as he gets secrets, also can travel to other worlds but I haven't read that far, he did went to another timeline tho. Anyway, give it a try and see if you like it. Rawr!: 战锤:哥们的秘密太多了!