TrishaCK123

this story is promising and you have a very haunting way of telling their miserable backgrounds...however, i find that in some chapters, the transitions from one scene to another is not smooth and confusing, plus the mistakes in names and their spellings can also get confusing... and you mentioned Elvira in one scene where Olivia was utterly pathetic in front of her which is another confusing thing for me because you are portraying her to be this heartless and cunning monster who is also as strong as a knight, so why???? why was she like that when faced with Elvira? you didn't even mention if Elvira used magic or whatsoever...even of the reveal is for later, i just think it's inconsistent... Anyway, i will stick out for a while and see where this story goes but it's still a looong ways away...😅

well duhhh...because she drove your mother away...with your pos father🙄

where does she get the audacity???!!! she should be begging for forgiveness...she discarded her own daughter Amelia! where is she even now? we haven't heard of Amelia yet or even Talia...tsk

the audacity of this homewrecker...she should be begging for her forgiveness 🤨🙄🤬

FEEL THE BUUURRRNNNN😈😈😈🔥🔥🔥

I'm confused here...i thought Matthias was away??? he wasn't there when Leila arrived with the baby and the Baron attacked them???

did i miss the chapter that states Matthias was already back? didn't she see him off??? did he know about Leila already? I'm confused...

LOL😅😅😅

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this should be fun😈😈😈BUT...did Matthias really betray her with that maid????🤔