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Review Detail of Defective_Angel in Naruto-Start by eating the golden fruit

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Overall, this novel is good, but there are few things I need to point out: The gold fruit in this story is not the original fruit from One Piece. In this version, it can turn things into gold, while the OG fruit couldn't, only control existing gold. The grammar is okay (who cares anyway), but there are few translation errors. Since there are only 11 chapters right, it should be easy for the author to correct them. (or just ignore them) MC might or might not change the storyline. Personally, I’m not putting much hope in him. 😂 The MC is 6-7 years older than Tsunade, so we can expect him to participate in the First Great Ninja War and make a name for himself—hopefully. (psst.. MC has system, so don't be a failure)

Naruto-Start by eating the golden fruit

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