Review Detail of Glebby_Boi in My Wife Morgan can hear my thoughts! (FATE SI)

The premise of the story is great. However, it’s quite obvious that gpt was used, and instead of elevating the MTL, it kinda feels like summaries of the chapters. This results in a bland and vague text often repeating itself. This is less of a rewrite and more of a gpt copy and paste. I’m sure the original work is good, however, this ain’t it.