Review Detail of Adwit_ojha in Cursed Blessings: Tales of twisted fates

Nice story, I like the pacing and the first chapter really seems very exciting. I like the character design though you could be more assertive on the use of some metaphors so that it makes the story more grand and have a gravitas. Thought the characters look really legendary. The development is good. Just be regular at updating, and you'll be good to go.