As the story progresses, it becomes more exciting due to the conflicts that arise and the way the MC develops. I would like to see more development of the secondary characters, as I feel they could add a lot more to the story. Up until chapter 6, which I’ve read, it’s looking good. Keep up the great work!
Coolguy
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