Allunios_Lv22mth

2024-08-26 00:59

The writing quality in terms of grammar is excellent. However, the tone feels a bit monotonous when reading. The characters are interesting and intriguing, and adding more visual descriptions could enhance their portrayal even further. Keep up the good work!

4.5

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