Item: LOOKISM:PATHWAY
Rating: 4.4

KqroLv42mth

2024-08-28 19:52

I like the story. The writing quality can improve but everything is comprensibile and English must be a secondary or third language so it's comprehensible. The story is interesting, i would like to see the mc go on his own path and do something unique. the mc is cool, but i would like to know about him more, likes dislikes, defects, good qualities ecc. The world background is good since this is a fanfic. 4.4 Stars It would be better if the Author made a more comprensible power system, because i know that we all read countless novels, so we don't really have time to memorize every stat. Thanks for the story and don't drop or we are gonna jump you in jjk style 🙏🏿😭

LOOKISM:PATHWAY

Legend_Man_1262

Not enough ratings

30 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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Legend_Man_1262Author

4th language

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_RVFILv3

4 languages?! are you Indonesian or smt?

Legend_Man_1262:4th language
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Legend_Man_1262Author

no I am not.

_RVFI:4 languages?! are you Indonesian or smt?

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_RVFILv3

damn... my parents would trade me for you. (if you're smart/worth bragging around relative)

Legend_Man_1262:no I am not.

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Legend_Man_1262Author

😹😹

_RVFI:damn... my parents would trade me for you. (if you're smart/worth bragging around relative)

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Legend_Man_1262Author

Hello, this is your author with another lookism novel. This is an easygoing story with an original plot, and if you have any problems, please let me know in the comments or here.

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_RVFILv3

Loving the story so far. Don't you dare drop it of your existence would be just like your username. 😼 (Legend)

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jeffmisteLv4

good stuff..............................................................................................................................................

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Vanix_Lv4

chapters are too short and i dont even kniw whats going on plot is all iver this look like kid writing his stupid fantasy even though there not lot of lookism fanfuc in webnivel this a trash

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HAMMADLv3

Loved the story so far, Great build up and don't get me started on the action scenes, So far am loving it, The only flaw i found was to much text of the power system and stats to remember. Begin an avid lookism fan i can't read, So i hope you do something about it.

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colmilloblancoLv12

Great story so far"…………………………………….

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King_0f_Cha0sLv4

The novel is full of grammatical mistakes and is hard to understand the narative tread[img=Speechless]

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