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2024-09-05 02:19

Honestly pretty good for a first novel. The grammar could be better but if english isn't your first language then it's ok. (btw are u french ?)

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phamtom3000
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Thx for review. And yes Im French ;-;

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I'm sorry for you author.

phamtom3000:Thx for review. And yes Im French ;-;
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