Right now there isn't anything big to complain about. The fights are great. Characters are portrayed faithfully to the originals. Story feels fast-paced but not rushed. With enough space for rest, development and relationships. Now spoilers. And for me that means complaints: - MC feels inconsistent. In his previous world he was a 13 years old, deaf and orphaned boy, not really loved by anyone and so, like every orphaned child, he knows 12 languages, knows quite a bit about history and even had time to read books and manga. xDD - Sometimes it feels like our guy isn't deaf. He knows how to read lips and so can communicate BUT, he was speaking with a swordsmith that has mask on. He shouldn't be able to red his lips. Often in those moments author just writes something like "He knew because of his throat vibrations". It feels like a little bit too much. Even more so as that was used on Hand Demon whose neck was hidden by his hands, just as his mouth. Those aren't really that bad, but I feel like that kills a little bit MC's individuality. Instead of a lifehack like that it might actually be better to to just let MC not hear sometimes. Just think about it, MC doesn't hear the demon and so the demon becomes more and more enraged because of that, or combining the silence with MC's creepy eyes and Demon gets gradually more and more scared, usually familiar with screams of his prey now he fears for his life because of silence
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MC has xray vision
nice idea. thank you
Oh, well taking in account the x-ray vision in those situations, looking through body parts or clothes, renders my idea quite useless. Some things also make a lot more sense. Like the whole: - demons are disgusting. - some guys look "beautiful". - can't fight girls. I thought he is using the deeper x-ray, looking inside muscles, more often than just looking through single body parts or clothes. Or is his vision allowing him both at the same time, giving him some sorts of layered cognition.
Emmanuel_Capricorn:nice idea. thank you
