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2024-08-17 01:06

Man this fanfic is really good (in my perspective) its just that the chapters are too short but everything is fantastic, hope to see more chaps and have a good day.

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Starting with the first place, i think it's a shame that many chinese authors don't think about having the 'system' slightly modify the videos that the protagonist will watch before sending them to others to watch and putting the 'real' images instead of the scenes from the movies. Now secondly, i think it's a shame that many chinese authors don't think about putting the name of the 'Universe', the 'Multiverse' as well as the 'Omniverse' at the beginning of each video to give an existential shock to those who are watching and so that they don't waste time with their thoughts running wild. Finally, thirdly, i think it's a shame that many chinese authors don't think about putting a presentation panel detailing specific information about those who are in the videos and avoiding many wild thoughts followed by headaches for those who are watching. ■ Example - 1️⃣; • Marvel Omniverse •> MCU Multiverse •> Universe-199999 •> Planet Earth! ● NOTE; • I know that what is usually used is 'Earth-199999', however, we are talking about the entire universe and not just planet Earth. So i think it would be better to put 'universe' instead of 'Earth' to differentiate and not show preferences. ■ Example ~> 2️⃣; • Name; Kal-El • Alias; Superman • Occupation; Superhero • Race; Kryptonian • Alignment; Neutral Good • Powers/Abilities; ⬇️ ▪︎ MASTERY; combat, martial arts, science, xenoscience, leadership, sociability, journalism and sports. ▪︎ TALENTS; genius-level intelligence, tactical genius, high charisma and omnilingualism. ▪︎ PHYSIOLOGY/LINEAGE; solar energy absorption, nigh-invulnerability, supernatural strength, supernatural defense, supernatural endurance, supernatural speed, supernatural health, supernatural senses, supernatural reflexes, supernatural hearing, supernatural regeneration, supernatural intelligence, supernatural brain, biological force field, high-speed flight, heat vision, telescopic vision, electromagnetic vision, freezing breath, ballistic sonic scream, semi-immortality, oxygen independence and self-sustainability. ● NOTE; • Of course, not only will the names of the abilities appear for viewers to see, but an intuitive explanation of the actual effects of the abilities will also be given directly to the minds of those watching. Essentially, it is the same as explaining in detail to someone the actual effect of Superman's 'solar absorption' ability, except that the explanation only lasts a second and was given directly to the minds of the viewers. ■ Example ~> 3️⃣; • Professor X and Hank believing that everyone who appears is a mutant. • The Boys members believing that everyone they see is Vought's asset.

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