Karfin2422Lv143mth
2024-07-24 22:25
The writing is great, but it has no substance. It’s just saying the same thing over and over again. It feels like someone gave AI a hundred word prompt and told it to make it into 10000 words
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Vivid_HorizonsAuthor
Which chapter?
Vivid_HorizonsAuthor
And this my first time writing and thank you for giving me feedback.I will make sure to improve it.
Karfin2422Lv14
It’s pretty much the first 3 chapters, I said the same thing over and over again, I suggest the next time you write you make a timeline of important events for each chapter so you don’t end up saying the same thing again and again
Vivid_Horizons:Which chapter?
Vivid_HorizonsAuthor
okay , thank you for feedback
Karfin2422:It’s pretty much the first 3 chapters, I said the same thing over and over again, I suggest the next time you write you make a timeline of important events for each chapter so you don’t end up saying the same thing again and again
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