Review Detail of Daoist_KittyKat in Re:Interdimensional Mercenary

An obligatory self review. My writing quality is obviously not that great, just average. The same as world background since I'm not that good at explaining. To those that wonder if this is a continuation of my previous fic or a rewrite. This is not, I use same idea that all. Everything else is different. This fic I decided to go on very slow pace and focus more on character and relationships development which I failed miserably in the past fic.