Review Detail of tylermoney in Naruto: Why a Illusion ninja in Sunagakure?(Restarted)

Didn't want to give myself too bad of a rating, but do comment on your ideas and provide feedback on how I wrote what I wrote. The main goal is to make a non-system Naruto novel that allows the MC to progress and meet different shinobi with powers that differ from the anime, and progress in his own creative path.