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Review Detail of DeathE in Star Wars: With Great Power Comes Great Responsibility

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DeathE
DeathELv131mthDeathE

I was looking forward to the idea of the story, however, reality is often disappointing. I belive it's written by or with AI, the descriptions and the repetitive use of pointless phrases scream AI. Unless author is repeating phrases like "The immense weight of his future knowledge. . ." for no reason, it's AI.

Star Wars: With Great Power Comes Great Responsibility

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ElettoAutorEletto

If grammarly counts as AI, then I've been caught with my pants down it seems. But, I will take this criticism and make changes. A bad review is still a review, thx.

RexHarris
RexHarrisLv14RexHarris

I agree that it does seem random sentences like this seem to get repeated very often. It might help to make a tally by like maybe copying these types of lines into a word doc to keep track of how often you say something. It can be like in real life speech where a person might over use an expression. The commenter also likely felt like it was AI because the phrase repeated often was one of those that made it obvious the mc was trying to be a bit dramatic.

Eletto:If grammarly counts as AI, then I've been caught with my pants down it seems. But, I will take this criticism and make changes. A bad review is still a review, thx.
Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv4Lucius_SS

Strange, I didn't get this impression myself.

DeathE
DeathELv13DeathE

Author might have gone back and fixed it, I couldn't tell you

Lucius_SS:Strange, I didn't get this impression myself.