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Item: Global OverHeat Apocalypse: Everyone Near Death by Dehydration
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La historia es interesante, pero deberías poner entre comillas las conversaciones de los personajes. The story is interesting, but you should put the characters' conversations in quotes. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

Global OverHeat Apocalypse: Everyone Near Death by Dehydration

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Thank you for the advice. I will improve it for the future[img=exp][img=exp]

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