For the review, it's decent so far but spelling/grammar could be better. There are also some paragraphs which are reapeated. For the plot, it follows other cn typemoon greece ff's, girl hephaestus, mc a student of chiron so and so forth. Also what's the raw name of the fic???
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Liked it!
me gustaSin respuestas. ¡Sé el primero!