Review Detail of TwistedTsunami in Legendary Broken Player - VRMMORPG

Hey there! I came across many of your comments on my previous book and I must say, they made my day. I had always been determined to finish writing that story, so it was disheartening when I lost motivation. But I learned from that experience. In this new version, you may find yourself reminiscing about the old one, but fear not, I have added so much more to this story. Especially in terms of character interactions and romantic developments. I have also made some changes to the plot to ensure a smoother flow. You will see that some characters now have different backgrounds and relationships with the main character. As for whether you should disregard your knowledge of the previous version, I can't give a definite answer. However, I'd love for you to give this new version a read and let me know what you think.