Review Detail of Helia_King in Fate/Hazbin: Charlemagne of Hazbin Hotel

Item: Fate/Hazbin: Charlemagne of Hazbin Hotel
Rating: 2.8

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Grammar is okay I guess, dialogue is missing stuff like “ to discern it from regular text. And if you’re going to make a fanfic about an already existing character you could at least spell is name right, his name is Charlemagne.

Fate/Hazbin: Charlemagne of Hazbin Hotel

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Tahmina_Begum_9138AutorTahmina_Begum_9138

i know i relish after a while i have spelling his name wrong after a while and now i fell bad

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HatemeidontcareLv11Hatemeidontcare

who the f#*k is charlomaine?

Tahmina_Begum_9138:i know i relish after a while i have spelling his name wrong after a while and now i fell bad

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Indra_lordLv4Indra_lord

the mc but the author put the wrong name

Hatemeidontcare:who the f#*k is charlomaine?

1mth

HatemeidontcareLv11Hatemeidontcare

then why the didn't fix it then?

Indra_lord:the mc but the author put the wrong name

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Indra_lordLv4Indra_lord

lazy to fix the name of the mc

Hatemeidontcare:then why the didn't fix it then?

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