Review Detail of Jackleell in Heir of Astaroth

Item: Heir of Astaroth
Rating: 4

Detalle de revisión

JackleellLv124dJackleell

Man, this story would have been good, but you just sped through everything, and the spelling is awful. Maybe use ChatGPT and copy-paste your words, and just say 'revised version with corrected grammar,' and tada, it will fix all your writing with no added things, just the way you wrote it but much better.

Heir of Astaroth

Zneo_12345

Liked it!

me gusta

Zneo_12345AutorZneo_12345

honestly i tried in my previous fic but it's still shit so i just decided not to, iIjust want to inspire people to write that's why I'm writing and the more people writes the more i get to read which was my priority in the first place but still thanks for the review

24d

Sin respuestas. ¡Sé el primero!