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Main character is very low IQ and gets bullied by the system. World building is fairly good but characters are one-sided and boring, plot is also predictable. The main reason I quit though is the HORRIFIC grammar. It's obvious that the author is still learning English but the book is barely readable. Would recommend to author to develop deeper characters and give the MC a little more IQ
THE WEAKEST SYSTEM IN HISTORY
UniverseM007
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sorry for Disappointing grammar but I just resently started using chat gpt after 27 chapters . and you are right I just started learning English a year ago. and i think I am doing pretty good so far. as for system and Ethans , they just made fun of each other maybe i was unable to bring out their funny moments as of yet. but in the future i will try to improve it. as for predictable storyline it was just a introduction volume. from 2nd volume the real deal will start from college to depth of the forest, with unique monsters to legendary creatures . and ofcourse scum of the society. but thanks for the review anyway