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I would have given a better review if MC wasn't like that. I can't stand the MC sparing people after they used underhanded methods of Killing on MC. For the most part story is good but MC is subpar , Plus the introduction of Onii chan b¡tch is triggering me too much so here is the promised review and bye.

Naruto: Starting as a Root trainee in a White Room Program.

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Leon_Luis_
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less infuriating, not much better... cause that would mean these characters are gonna interact even more

Desire96:well, spoiler ahead but it changes to Senpai in the next chapter you were reading, ie, 4 Months
Desire96
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well, ya I wanted to show the character of Mc, so him not killing children who want to kill might be infuriating, I won't blame you, that 'Oni-chan' Gig does change in the next chapter, so there is that, Thx for the review anyway.

Leon_Luis_
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onii chan thing annoyed me too much or i would have pushed through the bad parts like i did with some other fics that i consider silver and gold tier.

Desire96:well, ya I wanted to show the character of Mc, so him not killing children who want to kill might be infuriating, I won't blame you, that 'Oni-chan' Gig does change in the next chapter, so there is that, Thx for the review anyway.
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Desire96
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well, spoiler ahead but it changes to Senpai in the next chapter you were reading, ie, 4 Months

Leon_Luis_:onii chan thing annoyed me too much or i would have pushed through the bad parts like i did with some other fics that i consider silver and gold tier.
Desire96
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dude... sigh, I don't know what to say, I had to make some interesting characters for character interactions you know? I have no other excuse.

Leon_Luis_:less infuriating, not much better... cause that would mean these characters are gonna interact even more
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Desire96
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Also, didn't I promise No-Harem? Plus I believe that a man and a woman can be great friends too... Right?, also I will be taking that meme

Leon_Luis_:less infuriating, not much better... cause that would mean these characters are gonna interact even more
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Leon_Luis_
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I know, it was just too early that's all if she was introduced after he became friends with a dude in his Batch or after we grew attached to MC, you had so many time skips and fights that we only learnt of MC's mindset after she was introduced.

Desire96:dude... sigh, I don't know what to say, I had to make some interesting characters for character interactions you know? I have no other excuse.
Desire96
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there was a dude in the next chapter yk, plus she was Op in her own way

Leon_Luis_:I know, it was just too early that's all if she was introduced after he became friends with a dude in his Batch or after we grew attached to MC, you had so many time skips and fights that we only learnt of MC's mindset after she was introduced.
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Leon_Luis_
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yes you did but i have been fake promised too many times for me to trust them(i trust the promise enough to start the story but thats the end of me trusting the author unless i am attached to the MC)

Desire96:Also, didn't I promise No-Harem? Plus I believe that a man and a woman can be great friends too... Right?, also I will be taking that meme
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Well, I see... Fair

Leon_Luis_:yes you did but i have been fake promised too many times for me to trust them(i trust the promise enough to start the story but thats the end of me trusting the author unless i am attached to the MC)
Leon_Luis_
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well too late for that now isn't it, Damage is Already done and i have dropped the story, i might pick it up after a month when i can binge read it.

Desire96:there was a dude in the next chapter yk, plus she was Op in her own way
Desire96
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Well, then see you maybe next month then

Leon_Luis_:well too late for that now isn't it, Damage is Already done and i have dropped the story, i might pick it up after a month when i can binge read it.
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Desire96:Well, then see you maybe next month then