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Review Detail of HiyoriSimp in Reborn In The Multiverse With A Unlimited Upgrade System

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HiyoriSimp
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i feel compelled to write a review after following from the start basically. i have a few complaints, 1. the author has a bad naming sense, the main character is called "Lucifer D. Morningstar" i have no idea what the D stands for, also bad at giving titles, can't remember the titles, but i know its bad. 2. the characters are very soul less. initially, the author writes them the way they would act, but after our MC showed up, they basically became bunch of "yes man" puppets who can only follow orders. they have no personality, they act like they have no soul. 3. the pacing, I don't mind a fast pacing, but this too fast. not to mention the 'out of nowhere' romance between Natasha (from marvel) and the main character. it was completely unnecessary, especially when the MC has traversed the world with Kaguya for at least a thousand years, whom he had accepted as a student/servant, and in the recent chapters, romance seems to be brewing between them. which means that this story is going to go an unnecessary, cliché, harem route. Overall, a very cliché, multiverse travelling, wish-fullfillmenr story. and author, i don't mind cringe, but this is just bad. sorry, this is where I drop

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there are a few more key details that I'm missing out on, but it does not change the nature of my review