Review Detail of Stormie_Foxx in Cerian’s Dawn

As the Author I am my own worst critic but I am putting this here so that others who come to review the book can see it. I want honest feedback as this is my first book and I know I’m not the best of the best so both good and bad comments will help improve my work for both future books and chapters a like! Also to say thank you all for your love and support.