Review Detail of Grimotk in Dream Abyss

This is my first time writing a review on this platform, so I will try to be as honest as possible. This is a very good story with potential. It gives off ORV vibes and the MC is simply insane. Read up to chapter 10 and you will know. I don't even know how he even survived that. In any case, there are a few grammatical errors but they can be ignored. I hope the Author does not abandon the story like he did with his DxD fanfic.