Well, let's just say I'm extremely disappointed with the system and the main character, first off, the premise of the system is to make him great and that his wife should love him for himself. Because quote paraphrase "If you don't want Mc at his worst, you don't deserve him at his best" Ok cool, so why does his wife not currently love him at all and is only using him to get away from an arranged marriage, and the only way to win her heart is to at like a fool and to show something impressive, Aka his new found growing wealth and attributes attributed to the ding ding system. Basically destroying the entire concept of having him at his worse and getting his best as a reward, it's clear she doesn't want him at all right now and clearly doesn't deserve his best. This would he nice if she was poor and at least fell in love with a quality in him she saw at first sight. But either way, not saying to not read it but if you don't like sappy simp type early on then just skip, save yourself some time and trouble that could be used on better things, but my review above I will try to be as objective and fair as possible as a fellow author, at least about writing quality and stuff, cause the grammar is great for sure.
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