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Review Detail of Jackleell in A Saiyan God in DxD

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The pacing of this story is incredibly fast, leaving little room for character development or attachment. The protagonist gains power too quickly, making the progression feel rushed and lacking in depth. Additionally, the narrative lacks detail, with events occurring abruptly without sufficient explanation or context. Overall, the story could benefit from a slower pace and more attention to character growth and world-building.

A Saiyan God in DxD

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