It seems like an interesting start. I liked some of the nerd stuff at the beginning like the mention of how much data was in the cafe, and how little the MC starts with in the matter of stats. The writing is cohesive and has a nice flow, you won't get lost through it and can understand the scenes quite easily, with no need to scroll up and down to understand a sentence or a passage. Overall, a nice start for the novel.
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