Hi, this is the author, YUN_LIU_8787.You can ask questions related to the story here. (Basically Q/A)However you will know what the story is about and how good it is once you read it. So what are you waiting for?Start reading!
flowing_clouds
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me gustaIseeyou:I actually want to read this novel as it seems interesting but the grammar is rough man. Work on your English grammar or use some kind of software to help you write. Good luck bro
ZhourongHephaestus:a little bit of a major criticism is that I can't read past 1st page because of the grammar and writing style pls do the editing ASAP or get help of software and proof read it before posting please I hope to here the good news soon
good for you, I am adding it to the library again, so please edit or at lest proofread all the chapters if possible .
flowing_clouds:I'll make improvements.
half of it has become OK I think, but still the other half needs correction, please do the corrections as soon as possible, because the immersion is being cut short because of the simplest mistakes. Also, if possible proofread it to see if there is any mistakes.
flowing_clouds:Hello. Chapter 1 has been corrected.
half of it has become OK I think, but still the other half needs correction, please do the corrections as soon as possible, because the immersion is being cut short because of the simplest mistakes. Also, if possible proofread it to see if there is any mistakes.
flowing_clouds:Hello. Chapter 1 has been corrected.
ZhourongHephaestus:half of it has become OK I think, but still the other half needs correction, please do the corrections as soon as possible, because the immersion is being cut short because of the simplest mistakes. Also, if possible proofread it to see if there is any mistakes.
ZhourongHephaestus:half of it has become OK I think, but still the other half needs correction, please do the corrections as soon as possible, because the immersion is being cut short because of the simplest mistakes. Also, if possible proofread it to see if there is any mistakes.
Iseeyou:I actually want to read this novel as it seems interesting but the grammar is rough man. Work on your English grammar or use some kind of software to help you write. Good luck bro
flowing_clouds:Thank you, I'm new to this, and the novel may be flawed, so feel free to correct me!
ZhourongHephaestus:bro 2nd chapter is very hard to read with errors and repeated sentences, check those
Okay, I have reached the 20th chapter, and so far, it is readable, but it is not entirely correct. That said, it is much better than before.
flowing_clouds:Amended and completed
ZhourongHephaestus:Okay, I have reached the 20th chapter, and so far, it is readable, but it is not entirely correct. That said, it is much better than before.