Review Detail of The_Raven_Society in Chain of Times: The Villainess Deaths

NEW STORY! Its too short for me so I hope for an update. I love the story so far, even though its just starting out I love where it is going. I know nothing about whats going on, it remains a mystery most of the time so i hope i will love the journey of reading your story. Although I might say that the whole generalization of plot and concept is now new considering there is a lot of Villainess stories out there. This one however manage to piqued my interest because of the interesting flow of the story. The writing style could still improve, the pacing is perfect. Not to fast and not too slow. There is a hint of mystery in the story. But i would say the characters needs more voice and personality.