Review Detail of That_Cultivator in Divine Luck

Item: Divine Luck
Rating: 5

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That_CultivatorAutor3mthThat_Cultivator

Shameless author here, I am rating this 5 stars cuz this is my work and i can't rate it any less. all I wanna say is, if you find any errors, want me to fix something or wanna suggest something, do leave comments on the chapters and paragraphs. Grammar will improve with time, don't worry about it.

Divine Luck

That_Cultivator

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That_CultivatorAutorThat_Cultivator

single fl :)

Im_LaZy_007:bro, is this harem or Single FL?

1mth

CicadaAliveLv1CicadaAlive

yo cicada here the story so far has a good start and i could see this developing into a great story . some pointers can be : - The word divine is used too much - Each paragraph is short and contains only 1 dialogue

2mth

That_CultivatorAutorThat_Cultivator

yep yep, ty for the review! I will fix these mistakes in the future chapters! thanks a ton for pointing 'em out for me buddy!

CicadaAlive:yo cicada here the story so far has a good start and i could see this developing into a great story . some pointers can be : - The word divine is used too much - Each paragraph is short and contains only 1 dialogue

2mth

Im_LaZy_007Lv4Im_LaZy_007

bro, is this harem or Single FL?

That_Cultivator:yep yep, ty for the review! I will fix these mistakes in the future chapters! thanks a ton for pointing 'em out for me buddy!

1mth

Hardy1jLv13Hardy1j

That be like good!!!!!!!!! Amazing!!

That_Cultivator:single fl :)

1mth

Im_LaZy_007Lv4Im_LaZy_007

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That_Cultivator:single fl :)

1mth