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I read all the free chapters, and I was disappointed, not because the story was bad, but because of the opportunity you missed, man. When I read the title of the novel and the synopsis, I thought of something completely different, like a romance from that manga 'My Wife is a Demon Queen' (which I recommend, by the way). You got me very hopeful, author. You combined cultivation, a guy transmigrated into his own novel, and a beautiful waifu, all things people love. But it wasn’t what I imagined in my head. So many things happened in less than 20 chapters that I couldn’t understand half of it. Too many events at once. Not to mention the old man who became his master, which, in my opinion, didn’t make sense. If he has a golden finger, he doesn’t need a master. And in less than 10 chapters after meeting the protagonist (villain), they already separated. He went one way, and she went another, even though he is her slave. He should at least follow her. There wasn’t even time for the two to interact, man. Note: I’m giving my opinion regarding the beginning of the book. I haven’t read the recent chapters, so I don’t know if the book is good or bad. Up to where I read, it didn’t interest me, just the title and the premise of what it could be.

Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic

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Thanks for the review

PhoenixYT
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I haven’t read this yet but the “ he has a golden finger, he doesn’t need a master” is pretty much bs. Hell I can think off a few at the top of my head

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There I expressed myself poorly, I meant a strong golden finger like the MC's, in addition to his cultivation speed, which is much faster. If you read, you will understand. As far as I have read, the 'master' hasn't taught him anything significant, just gave him some information, something that, in my opinion, he could figure out on his own. And there is another detail: currently, the MC is pretending to be an Immortal Primal who lost his cultivation and is gradually recovering (I don't know much about the power ranking in this novel, but from what is mentioned, it is quite a high rank). So when he accepts a master, it ends up undermining his image as someone who was supposed to be very strong, you understand?

PhoenixYT:I haven’t read this yet but the “ he has a golden finger, he doesn’t need a master” is pretty much bs. Hell I can think off a few at the top of my head
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That makes sense

Worldofimagination:There I expressed myself poorly, I meant a strong golden finger like the MC's, in addition to his cultivation speed, which is much faster. If you read, you will understand. As far as I have read, the 'master' hasn't taught him anything significant, just gave him some information, something that, in my opinion, he could figure out on his own. And there is another detail: currently, the MC is pretending to be an Immortal Primal who lost his cultivation and is gradually recovering (I don't know much about the power ranking in this novel, but from what is mentioned, it is quite a high rank). So when he accepts a master, it ends up undermining his image as someone who was supposed to be very strong, you understand?