Its alright, not a reincarnate tough. Thats a misleading statement. That said, its fairly well written, the story is alright, the character feels a bit bland but atleast the author does their best to add to it with visuals. The release rate is pretty good. The world background is nothing to write home about. All in all a decent ooc Darth Vader read. If I would have to point out a way to improve it, then I would say making it more personal. The story doesnt feel very relatable, more like a third person perspective in how detatched the character feels.
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