Review Detail of SalveYing in Just Another Chat Group

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SalveYingLv103mthSalveYing

God, it's horrible. It's like two hours of poetry from a self-deprecating teenager. I understand that he's a teenager, and I get that he's in Severus's body, but please, kill me. I can summarize the story as: "I am Severus, I am horrible for hurting my Lily. Why don't you love me? My heart is with you forever, but I will never be with you, and that makes my heart not beat." It's like a marathon of secondhand embarrassment. I like drama, but not so poorly done. I don't know if that changes in the future; I hope it does. Good luck to anyone brave enough to read it.

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AnotokiLv11Anotoki

Lol, surely it's not that bad

3mth

BoundaryWalkerLv2BoundaryWalker

was it that bad?

Anotoki:Lol, surely it's not that bad

3mth

TheSonOfGodLv1TheSonOfGod

Nah, he changed tunes about 18 in, so I have hopes

BoundaryWalker:was it that bad?

3mth

CewuLv14Cewu

it is wayyy to theatrical it is not even that much drama... like the amount of drama is minimal... but the little drama that is there gets sttetched into 100 paragraphs

2mth

The_cowLv14The_cow

hard to read too

2mth

ProfaneImmortalLv13ProfaneImmortal

Are you sure bro ? I read 3 ch and i feel like snape is vomiting on top of my head...

TheSonOfGod:Nah, he changed tunes about 18 in, so I have hopes

2mth

IreallylikereadingLv4Ireallylikereading

thank you for that valuable information, as a person who absolutely hatew drama this is very much appreciated, have a good day sir.

2mth

IreallylikereadingLv4Ireallylikereading

*hates*

Ireallylikereading:thank you for that valuable information, as a person who absolutely hatew drama this is very much appreciated, have a good day sir.
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2mth

KasiCairLv1KasiCair

No. It is worse. The first chapters made me want to vomit. It's bad. Disgusting even. As for the latter chapters? I dunno. Didn't read them yet. I will try. Will see. But really. I have no idea why this author thought it would be a good thing to give his transmigrated MC Snape's feelings. Logically, NOBODY would want that. It's like being mind-fked. It sucks and makes the story really bad. And the author writes in this stupid flowery way that reading is starting to get really irksome. It starts to feel like a chore.

Anotoki:Lol, surely it's not that bad

2mth

PrimalWhiteStarLv4PrimalWhiteStar

than you need to read more... the start is self-deprecating, but the MC develop out of that phase pretty much in a good way, you just need to read the story past the first few chapters

12d

DaoistOfeOTALv4DaoistOfeOTA

tbf the beginning of a story is meant to capture your attention and get you involved into the world it is not completely turn you off cause the mc is unbearable

PrimalWhiteStar:than you need to read more... the start is self-deprecating, but the MC develop out of that phase pretty much in a good way, you just need to read the story past the first few chapters

10d

PrimalWhiteStarLv4PrimalWhiteStar

true... but the story is good after the depressing introduction and a "bit" of it can interest the reader...

DaoistOfeOTA:tbf the beginning of a story is meant to capture your attention and get you involved into the world it is not completely turn you off cause the mc is unbearable

10d

DaoistOfeOTALv4DaoistOfeOTA

Yah key word a “bit” not 18 chapters full

PrimalWhiteStar:true... but the story is good after the depressing introduction and a "bit" of it can interest the reader...

PrimalWhiteStarLv4PrimalWhiteStar

...well... ... ...

DaoistOfeOTA:Yah key word a “bit” not 18 chapters full