Review Detail of Facez_ in One Piece (SI): Pirate Painter Odyssey

hmm... good start! I looking forward to more chapters and here advised when u written a one piece that Mc is a part of straw hat is that you should write comedy's moments in the canon not just the main event as alabasta and so on. causes it make the straw hat look really alive. others fanfic make this mistake as they make luffy,zoro,nami so on look like robot. so yeah! keep up good work!