Review Detail of DaoistuK3Ovv in RED: Swordsman in the Apocalypse

ah, now I'm really curious how far you've come😂 but thank you for giving it another chance. i really didn't deviate actually, but try to 79 and drop another review then🙃😁

I did continue and what I said happened you kept dragging this out it’s so unbearable he found her and doesn’t ask her a single thing and then just lets her go now he wants to find her and question her you already had the chance it’s wild how it got better then flopped in one paragraph and why is Lyra important she’s a gold digger she only wants to travel with him for her own benefit introduce a new girl or something or if you can’t do that give him a two person harem if you can’t scrap her. I really don’t see this being interesting till 79 but I’ll reach 79 and come back but seriously why do you keep deviating his family was right in front of him what excuse do you have dude and you had the audacity to deny my claims

alright, i believe i should address this now since u kept up ur side by coming back. first of all, I'm sorry if it may seem like I'm deviating from finding his family, buy if you've come this far, you've seen how it was when he found his old neigbhborhood. This might be a spoiler depending on how you want to look at it, but i believe you have the right to know this anyway: the true clues, and 'story' takes place in Allan Fort where he meets his family, or what remains of them. Now, as it may seem as if I'm deviating like you say, but if i went straight ahead and resolved him finding his family immediately before even the end of the first volume, then there wouldn't be much to write about other than world building (which i already am even focusing on in volume one, and two). I'm not agreeing to the claims, however I'm not also rebuking you for that. Huey is powerful, overpowered even. he's a character who ploughs through most things in the plot, and the best way to avoid this book from becoming 'junk food' like many other OP MC books out there is by giving someone like Huey, a seemingly 'small task' a goal which seems small in the grand scheme of things when you consider how powerful he is, but is something that keeps him grounded instead. and that goal is his family. see it from this perspective: someone returns to his home town from a long extended period fo vacation to discover his family/friends are no more (either dead, or they moved) and if it was the latter, he seeks them out without having much clues to begin with(this is related because of the current civilization of mankind in the apocalypse, where land was displavce, and more than half the world died and was plundered.), do you think that person would so easily succeed in less than a week or two??? at finding his family? it's like a travel, it's perilous and full of 'stories', which you term as 'deviation from the plot '. i dunno about you ,but whenever i travel, i meet new people and return with new stories to tell. but that's beside the point. if i had Huey plot armor through this book, then what's left of it there to write? I'll just be milking it by having him one shotting one-dimensional villains and opponents that come his way. there will be no plot progress no character development. that's junk food. not plot. i appreciate your constructive criticism, and continue to look forward to more. however, if you still feel this book isn't to your liking, then it as shame for me to say that you may feel free to drop it. and thank you again for the review :⁠-⁠) if there's anything else, please feel free to ask, challenge, or point out. i will resolve it to the best of my abilities. thanks for reading.

ah, yes one more thing. the Lyra part. yes, definitely she's a gold digger. i was afraid i wasn't portraying that well, but I'm glad u seem to realise that. I have future plans for Lyra, and i understand if you don't currently like her. that's my fault for making her that way after all. her 'obssession'(?), do i call it that at this stage?...is part of her character develiopment. i didn't want a regular avergage FL that just latches on for no reason. and tho Lyra may seem like a leech, that's enough reason for me to keep her on. until she's no longer of use. she's a female lead, but i haven't decided she's the main girl. I'll leave it up to her development. thank you :⁠-⁠)

hmmm I think ill pass. no signs if its a harem or not, plus she seems like the very annoying sounding typical harem thot that won't go away and tries to hump the mcs leg. it doesn't give me hopes for reading this even if it seems the mc is actually op and its not fake tags for once, like this app seems to have a major problem with. Good luck with your novel

😂😂 alright, i understand. thanks