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EclipseKing
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2024-02-15 04:53

Utter garbage

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daoist832572
daoist832572Lv4

How do you keep the review short?

MirageKing
MirageKingLv14

Lol

daoist832572:How do you keep the review short?
Abu_abdillah_Muadz
Abu_abdillah_MuadzLv1

Selama mc nya tidak direndahkan oleh para wanita dan tetap bersikap seperti orang normal dan dikurangi atau dihilangkan unsur komedinya maka cerita ini akan bagus jangan seperti yang sebelum sebelumnya.

Abu_abdillah_Muadz
Abu_abdillah_MuadzLv1

Maksud saya diremehkan

Abu_abdillah_Muadz:Selama mc nya tidak direndahkan oleh para wanita dan tetap bersikap seperti orang normal dan dikurangi atau dihilangkan unsur komedinya maka cerita ini akan bagus jangan seperti yang sebelum sebelumnya.
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

dude please tell us how did you keep your review so short

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