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Rami_67
Rami_67Lv19mth
2024-01-29 22:11

so far i really enjoy this story there's nothing annoying me which is very good all the characters feel accurate to the lore so far i am very excited to see the rest of the story i really hope the author doesn't drop it like the rest

Aegon Snow

Ghostrider0002
4.0
166 Chs

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Ghostrider0002
Ghostrider0002Autor

Thank you for your support, don't worry, I won't give up, even if I can take a break, I'll try to release chapters on other stories so you can wait.

9mth
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Rami_67
Rami_67Lv1

do you have another stories?

Ghostrider0002:Thank you for your support, don't worry, I won't give up, even if I can take a break, I'll try to release chapters on other stories so you can wait.
9mth
Ghostrider0002
Ghostrider0002Autor

I just saw your answer so I apologize for the late response to your question. I have several other fanfictions in progress which will soon be published for free on Webnovel

Rami_67:do you have another stories?
4mth
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Don_Diegow
Don_DiegowLv1

a forced story at many points. It even makes you want to read it at the beginning but as you progress the need to swallow the script is very forced... nonsense things, facilities, absurdities and "magic powers" are the last trick to bury the plot.

9mth

Melshan
MelshanLv7

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7mth
EphemeralKaos
EphemeralKaosLv5

Every part of this story is forced plot points. It's basically a Gary Stu except that there are constant poorly written in flaws/mistakes that the main character has to work his way around the problem with that is that because they are poorly written, Is that most of the time these mistakes are easily avoidable but like I said, purposely, not avoided, making you really question the characters intelligence. Not to mention the main character is incredibly chaotic in personality Is literally like if you were to mix a child and an adult And throw them into a arrogant teenager it's just pure annoyance anyway I gave writing ability three stars because while this was pretty bad, I do think the author has talent I gave update stability. Three stars because I haven't been around this story long enough to have a clear understanding of how often or well they update Story development I gave one star because well the story started off, fairly strong-ish But went downhill pretty quickly I gave character design three stars because the characters were pretty bad, but bar the atrocity that is the main character. You can kind of sometimes see faint, resemblances of what they were supposed to be. World background I gave four stars simply because the author seems to have done a lot of research, so even though there was a lot of BS all throughout the story, there were some things that made sense

7mth
George_Vasiliu
George_VasiliuLv3

MC is a lunatic and not the fun kind ..his consistency as a character is 0 ...it's so bad it even pulls GRRM's characters down to his level There are good parts in this but it all buckles under the pressure of this main character , forcing lots of plot holes and contrivances

7mth
Ghostrider0002
Ghostrider0002Autor

I hope you all have a great time reading this fanfiction, I had a lot of trouble putting it out because I didn't think I was good enough at it but I think sometimes you have to take courage and get started if you like this story I am grateful to you in advance and I hope that you can continue to follow me throughout this long adventure.

9mth
_Harsh_
_Harsh_Lv14

i like the story tho other than MC everyone else feels a bit dumber and the plot seems bit rushed

9mth
Fito
FitoLv5

Revela spoiler

9mth
Mohamad_100
Mohamad_100Lv3

Man o just found it and still didn't read it yet but before that can you make VAL one of his wife it will benefit him well because he is gonna marry the princess

9mth
Vansh_Suryavanshi
Vansh_SuryavanshiLv4

I didn't understand the first chapter and the beginning is a bit confusing but other than this every thing else is good .

9mth
Dragon525
Dragon525Lv2

started off great, down hill with the last two chapters.

8mth
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