My second review of this fanfic. Author, I started reading your story again and with more patience, and honestly despite some problems that the MC has, for example it seems that he trains but doesn't evolve much, like in another fanfic the MC, even though he is of civilian origin, has much more progress in their training and it makes sense, after all at this age of 6 to 19 years, a shinobi's strength grows very quickly with the right training. Second thing I wanted to talk about is that as your MC is a senju with mokuton, he has to have a wise body, and his physical strength must be monstrous, Obito with just Hashirama's cells had great physical strength, another thing is that canon hashirama had more chakra than kurama, so your MC can't have chakra issues.
Kakukami
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me gustano? It’s the whole point of x amount of tails representing how much chakra they have, if 9 meant infinite then 10 tails wouldn’t exist, Thus 9 tails clearly has a maximum cap
Nobe_Soen:isn't kuramas chakra endless
ThanatosGreekGod:no? It’s the whole point of x amount of tails representing how much chakra they have, if 9 meant infinite then 10 tails wouldn’t exist, Thus 9 tails clearly has a maximum cap