Review Detail of Grim999 in Arthur Belmont-Prince and The Cursed Mirror: Harry Potter Fanfiction

Hello, it would help me a lot if you could write me an opinion about what you think about this fanfiction. Bearing in mind that English is not my first language, please be forgiving of grammatical mistakes. because I write out of passion, I don't have a beta reader to correct them, and I have very little time. If you want to write a review, I would appreciate it if you could concentrate more on the story.[img=recommend]