In general, a good job, especially the first chapter, interesting and fresh for the genre. As a reader there are parts of the following chapters that have me a little lost, I need more support points to have the mental image of the scenes, but they are details to improve to build a good novel on the main plot that you already have and it is good
Rerian
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me gustaSin respuestas. ¡Sé el primero!