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Review Detail of OddSivren in Chronicles of Terra Alpha

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OddSivren
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Pros: The start of Chronicles of Terra Alpha is super interesting, like how it mixes magic and sci-fi. Alex's move from Earth to this new world is cool and makes you wanna know more. Cons: The first few chapters are kinda slow, and they talk a lot about the city and guilds. It's cool but sometimes feels like too much info and not enough happening. Needs more exciting stuff early on."

Chronicles of Terra Alpha

Orion_Ashvale

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Yeah Sorry I posted my outlines by accident and I got everything mixed up in my Writing software give me a little while to find it an Review an fix any mistakes I come across.