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Review Detail of Sorkoth in Gotham's Dead End Bar

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Sorkoth
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Honestly, this is completely deserving of 5 stars. To begin with: The writing is top-tier. To elaborate: it's very good. Little errors. Wide vocabulary for describing stuff, etc. Author even has a very good hold of the character speech patterns (ex: Harley, Starfire, and some others i won't mention to not spoil anything.). Without knowing who spoke, you can already tell, for most characters. Chapter release is decent. For the chapter length however, it's absolutely amazing considering the usual standard for fanfics in this site website. So, 5/5 on that. Story development is where it gets iffy. For me i quite like it, some may not. I'd say it's on the slower side, but it can be fast. The thing is; usually with the many characters involved, you get some special POVs here and there in the chapters, so it also feels like it progresses. Along with of course, where it may seem to drag on "slowly" when Sean starts telling stories. But i also like it a lot, many of the worlds mentioned not even i know, so i also get to learn. Easy 5/5 for me. Character design... As a fanfic, normally a 5 is kind of not ideal; but the author, as i've said before, has a VERY good grasp on the characters. Along with developing them i'd say decently well, for a story that has so many POVs and characters, all at the same time and space together. Their personalities, humor, quirks... I'm not an avid fan of DC, but i didn't see many/any complaining about infidelity to character, so i'll say that's a big W. 5/5 as well. World background: obvious 5/5. The stories add depth, along with the POVs of the different characters. I read and learn about them and their background/histories/problems/motivations. Such as Mr.freeze having a sick wife (i didn't know that), the reason he ended up a villain. Not to mention how Sean's stories could make novels of their own, which i wouldn't mind reading. The way his powers and past lives tie into the story is quite fun to read as well. Lastly, the "cuck" thing... Well, it's Webnovel. Most people read like they're the protagonist. So, of course, when someone in the harem doesn't give ALL their love to the protagonist, they get butthurt, thinking it's infidelity. Spoilers: (Kind of, about the Harley/cuck situation) (A little context for harley thingy: She loves Ivy. They're in a relationship. Harley accepts Sean fucking them both. They love it. They love him. But also love eachother. Is it that hard? No. Is it NTR? No. Harley herself joked about being a 'cuck', not the other way around. Some people truly project their insecurities a bit too much in the reviews, and nitpick that part; instead of reviewing the REST of the novel. I'd never rate this below 3 stars, simply because it's too well-written. I also have some stuff i don't like, or moments/chapters that are unpleasant to read, but they're few and far in between. As of reading up to chapter 51, there are obvious faults. But none that ruin this history to the point of rating 1-star, imo.)

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